mando عضوممتاز
عدد المساهمات : 695 تاريخ التسجيل : 01/07/2009 العمر : 45 الموقع : life
| موضوع: المبنى للمعلوم و المبنى للمجهول السبت أغسطس 22, 2009 2:56 am | |
| المبنى للمعلوم و المبنى للمجهول Active Voice Passive Voice Choosing Active Voice Changing passive to active Passive Voice | Agent | Changed to Active Voice | [ندعوك للتسجيل في المنتدى أو التعريف بنفسك لمعاينة هذه الصورة] | most of the class | | | agent not specified; most likely agents such as "the researchers" | | | the CIA director and his close advisors | | | agent not specified; most likely agents such as "we" | | Changing active to passive Some suggestions 1. Avoid starting a sentence in active voice and then shifting to passive. Unnecessary shift in voice | Revised | Many customers in the restaurant found the coffee too bitter to drink, but it was still ordered frequently. | Many customers in the restaurant found the coffee too bitter to drink, but they still ordered it frequently. | He tried to act cool when he slipped in the puddle, but he was still laughed at by the other students. | He tried to act cool when he slipped in the puddle, but the other students still laughed at him. |
2. Avoid [ندعوك للتسجيل في المنتدى أو التعريف بنفسك لمعاينة هذا الرابط] caused by the use of passive voice. A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that modifies a word not clearly stated in the sentence. Dangling modifier with passive voice | Revised | To save time, the paper was written on a computer. (Who was saving time? The paper?) | To save time, Kristin wrote the paper on a computer.
| Seeking to lay off workers without taking the blame, consultants were hired to break the bad news. Who was seeking to lay off workers? The consultants?) | Seeking to lay off workers without taking the blame, the CEO hired consultants to break the bad news. |
3. Don't trust the grammar-checking programs in word-processing software. Many grammar checkers flag all passive constructions, but you may want to keep some that are flagged. Trust your judgement, or ask another human being for their opinion about which sentence sounds best. | |
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telenet Admin
عدد المساهمات : 10533 تاريخ التسجيل : 26/06/2009 الموقع : kelmah.own0.com
| موضوع: رد: المبنى للمعلوم و المبنى للمجهول السبت أغسطس 22, 2009 3:12 am | |
| جميل جدا ياباشا كل سنه وانت طيب يابرنس
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The FIRST KNIGHT عضو ذهبى
عدد المساهمات : 1109 تاريخ التسجيل : 30/07/2009 العمر : 43
| موضوع: رد: المبنى للمعلوم و المبنى للمجهول السبت أغسطس 22, 2009 10:08 pm | |
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nogom_net عضو ماسى
عدد المساهمات : 5552 تاريخ التسجيل : 30/06/2009
| موضوع: رد: المبنى للمعلوم و المبنى للمجهول الثلاثاء أغسطس 25, 2009 2:58 pm | |
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